Talk:Kuria/@comment-5331442-20150819191800/@comment-73.205.175.235-20150910070039

That's because it's not a rhyme. (Obviously.) So here's a bit of a nerdy literary rant:

Poems are not all meant to rhyme. It depends on what the author wants or what type of poem is being made. Anomalies in structure tend to convey meaning or otherwise indicate shifts in tone. Also, a huge portion of the text doesn't "rhyme" at all - most of them use consonance and alliteration. "Fate" and "Face" in 1, "Amiss" and "Witnessed" in 3, etc.

But I'm not a fan of the text as a whole because it's very dissonant and off-rhythm. Which fits the Grineer well, but I'm not a fan of it regardless. It's probably because all of the different portions of them were written as standalone pieces and not meant to connect beyond the sense of telling the story of the Twin Queens.

I also don't enjoy the word choice, some of it feels like a cop-out. But those are just my two cents. /endrant

'''tl;dr: Shit doesn't have to rhyme. The text's okay but I don't like it too much.'''